A few enjoyable tracks, and a nice maid staring back at you. Not bad for a first try at flash, though it does need color, as the maid is a bit on the harsh side to see since black and white in pencil is a bit painful to look at on a screen.
So 3 things.
A) More tracks.
B) Color.
C) Make the maid move a bit to the music to make it less static. Prehaps earphones?